Talk:Introduction
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Revision as of 06:10, 29 May 2013 by 87.231.20.72 (Talk)
This looks like a messy wall of text. Divide it into sections based on what each bit is trying to express, I think. Having random phrases in bold and allcaps looks obnoxious and lame, also. there are other ways to emphasize individual ideas.
tl;dr - Anon